Decision Making and Women Term Paper

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Black Women in White Male Industries

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You have chosen in this paper a topic that has both national and international significance. How indeed inclusive, fair, and just are so called "inclusion or set-aside" initiatives? How open and accessible are the programs to new immigrants and minorities? These are all very interesting questions that your paper raises.

But you don't fully address whether or not the rational approach considers such programs to be either fair, effective, and even legitimate. Are these programs acceptable or legitimate in the eyes of a policy analyst or maker who subscribes to the rational choice perspective? Why and why not? Your paper also seems to contain a few sentences at the end that are not properly paraphrased but yet are not under quotation marks.
This needs to be paraphrased or removed or quoted to avoid plagiarism.

Please find below your Paper 1 Grade and your reviewed paper with my track changes and comments, including some of corrections or suggestions mentioned above. You can make these corrections to improve your score

Paper 1 Grade (Tentative, Revise and Resubmit)

Criterion

Points

Score

Brief Introduction and Outline

10

7

Discusses themes in the readings

10

8

Draws from and summarizes key readings-at least 3 different readings and authors

25

19

Initiates and sustains a central thesis and argument

20

15

Scholarly and organized writing with sources and citations

15

13

Conclusion

10

8.....

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